edmondoman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[EEL]

bland. boring. un-engaging. sloppy.

i can agree. i never would have thought this would b on the front page either. What's with the pauses, first with the title, then there are 2 min periods where nothing is happening and ur just staring at a blank screen. im sorry this took you 3 weeks to produce. i would suggest tightening up the timing, animation, and audio. this flash could have been 40 seconds long, but seems to drag on forever.

[The drummer]

Not Much To Say

Except a TOM isn't a Crash, maybe u shoulda found another drumset gif. on google images.

[LightPowered]

Great Style

Very Stylish design, i liked it, it's good because ur style gives ur animation a voice, and character, and unlike the monotony of all the thousands of flashes, ur style is distinct and individual. Also ur effort is apparent in this flash, lots of detail and just great work. Good Job, and keep it up.

[Flashdrop]

Has Potential

It starts off with lots of promise, but then leaves off with a shot of the dudes head for like 5 mins then ends, it is kind of evident that u got tired of animating by the end and just cut it off there. But if you intended it to be like that, then maybe making more clear what the message is would be helpful.

Freddih responds:

haha no, you're 100% right, I just got tired of it :P

[The Lonely Castle Crasher]

sad attempt

Can anybody tell me which part of this is funny? cause i didn't notice any humor throughout the whole thing. To improve your next animations, try using: actual animation, as apposed to just skewing the characters to talk. And try making jokes, or making the characters do something actually funny or amusing. Your attempts at blue humor failed, and the end was creepy. This whole flash was extremely contrived.

LAVAGASM responds:

I apologize that you didn't enjoy my flash. Thanks for the review!

[sharpie madness]

Long and hard?

How long is long exactly? 30 mins? and hard... i saw the detail in the stick men. Like your video has the potential to be cool, if you put like maybe a months more work into it, and make some improvements in the animation... - TO the person below No it wasnt a slideshow, it was an attempt at stop motion photography... which is just another form of animation.

[Jesus vs. Godzilla]

SICK

THIS WAS SOO DOPE. it wasn't perfect yes. but i loved it, like it was sick, ur a great animator. And like i don't watch anime so like what is a bleach that everyone is taling about!? is it the thing like jesus turns into? haha watever it is, like u still made this vid dope. loved it

the ending was abrupTO BE CONTINUED!!

[Gopher Ball Z 3]

Fixing the lag

I think if you change the audio setting from 'event' to 'stream' (at least for the voices) that will fix the lag. Now im not 100% sure thats the problem, but i'm about 90% sure. It's worth a try anyways.

Also, good flash, good deal of work u put into it shows. good work homie.

[Everyday]

great

that flash was awsome full of style good angles and original. i thought it was really good.

***the previous review by "QuixoticCreator" had to be the most retarded thing i have ever read. "only- thing that could have been nicer was the color scheme. It was ok, but felt predictable. Especially the white-gradient-blue sky and the Green trees. The buildings and bus were soft warm greys that felt fine."

<<< are u a fucking retard?? first of all the sky is fuckin blue, second of all trees are fucking green!! obv. thats predictable!. second of all there is no such thing as a "warm grey" grey is grey!! warm colors are: red, orange, and yellow, none of those colors are in grey or else it wouldnt be grey! soo stop trying to be a fuckin critic. you should recognize when someones artwork is well done and original like this one is, why are u trying to make urself look good by giving advice to someone clearly a million times more talented then you are!

[If...]

that was shit

you tried to cover up your shitty animation skills by putting in sentimental music,
its not gunna work buddy, dont ask me how this made it to the front page. My summary of this movie: some retarded animal freak with stiches looping three frames over and over.
i dont wanna dis your work or the time u spent on this but take my advice move on to something else.